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This is another one of my shortstories, people! It's actually only a short text, but it's about being in love. Maybe you can recognize the feeling...? P.s. As usual, there's something wrong with the text...

The forest was one gigantic mud-hole, with some random trees sticking up here and there. The trees seemed to like the rain - they looked greener and taller, as if they reached up to the sky to get as much water as possible.                                           The rain was poring down, like an enormous garden snake, watering the trees as if they were flowers. Still, the sun was shining, and it made the rain look like thousands and thousands of diamonds falling from the sky. Tiny, white butterflies were swirling around, dodging the drops of rain that nearly hit them.

Her clothes were soaking wet, and dreadfully heavy. Her black hair lay close to her forehead, dripping with water. The air was cool, but her entire body felt warm like the sparkling rain-diamonds hit her arms like a gentle touch of a hand, crept under her skin and started to rush around with immense speed in her veins, making her blood boil and bubble.                               Her green eyes captured every movement nearby, nothing was unnoticed. And her sight changed, from being very foggy, to very clear, and back again to foggy. She wanted to lay down, lay down and scream as loud as she could, or her heart would probably burst, scatter and fall down like a thousand red pieces on the green and muddy ground.                                          Her feet felt as wet as the rest of her, as her shoes soaked when she stepped in small ponds she didn't see. The roots of the old, powerful trees stuck up from the ground, slippery and wet, making her road even more difficult. But she didnt care. Nothing could bother her now.



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